5 Mart 2009 Perşembe

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THESIS STATEMENT
Every person has different characteristic traits however every characteristic traits of a person cannot be known.Even if you live with a friend of yours you still cannot be able to understand character of your friend properly, this is because every person has some characteristic traits that are not observable.For example I have some habits or characteristic traits that my friends don’t know about. I have difficulty in making friends and I am not as calm as you think and I am good at some house works.

BODY PHARAGRAPH 1
Topic Sentence
Firstly I cannot be close friend with somebody easily
• It takes time to be friend with somebody,Ican not share my feelings before I know that person very well.
• I maybe get on well but can not be sincere easily.
• I don’t speak very much so they will not understand me completely.
BODY PHARAGRAPH 2
Topic Sentence
I seem to be a calm person but I am actually very angry.
• I don’t have very patience ,I can’t stand when something goes wrong
• I can easily get angry when somebody does injustice
• Always I get so angry with my brothers that we fight physically.
BODY PHARAGRAPH 3
Topic Sentence
I can do good house-work; cleaning, sometimes cooking etc.
• At home I always help my mother with chores.
• I can do good pastry but not as good as my mother certainly
• I am very meticulous; so I always do the cleaning myself, and get angry with anybody who makes mess.
CONCLUSION
I think my horoscope has an effect on my character. I am Gemini so I can behave differently from usual at any time. But I can get use to every situation ; and this is contradictory but somehow I can be able to be patient and work to make things right. Even I sometimes can’t understand myself so it is hard for my friends to know me completely. May it be easy . 

1 yorum:

  1. Nice work; but keep in mind that "For example I have some habits or characteristic traits that my friends don’t know about." You should give clues about the topic sentences. You have to answer what kind of habits you mean. You can do this just using phrases. Moreover, please use "cannot" instead of "can not". You can start writing your essay.

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